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Mar 6, 2015 23:23
　Today, I created a web page that summarizes my previous posts. Actually, I had created a similar web page, but it was inconvenient because I used accordion representation. The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would be open when we click the post title. This movement was rather cool, but I couldn't read my post unless I click it. I wanted to search corrected posts using some keywords, and to do this, there's a need all post are opened. So I created new one which is simple, light and open. Now I can search my posts effectively. Hehehe I'm so tired to create this. In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.

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No. 1　wendy's correction
  • The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would be open when we click the post title.
  • The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would open when we click the post title.
  • This movement was rather cool, but I couldn't read my post unless I click it.
  • This movement was rather cool, but I couldn't read my post unless I clicked it.
  • I wanted to search corrected posts using some keywords, and to do this, there's a need all post are opened.
  • I wanted to search corrected posts using some keywords, and to do this, there's a need for all post to be opened.
  • So I created new one which is simple, light and open.
  • So I created a new one which is simple, light and open.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the case file and re-design this page.
cool idea
Nameless
  • In the near future, I will re-create the case file and re-design this page.
css is correct. it's a styling language for websites.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
And thank you for the complement, Nameless さん. :)
Nameless
You're welcome. But I would like to ask, do you mind if I correct your entries? I am fluent and my stepgrandfather is an american...
kanotown
No, not at all! I'm really glad if you correct my entries (my poor English). :D
No. 2　wendy's correction
  • The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would be open when we click the post title.
  • The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would open when we click the post title.
  • So I created new one which is simple, light and open.
  • So I created a new one which is simple, light and open.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the case file and re-design this page.
cool idea
No. 3　titanium's correction
  • Today, I created a web page that summarizes my previous posts.
  • Today, I created a web page that aggregates/collects my previous posts.
    　Correct grammar but I think this word describes what your code does better than "summarizes."
  • Actually, I had created a similar web page, but it was inconvenient because I used accordion representation.
  • Actually, I had previously created a similar web page, but it was inconvenient because I used accordion representation.
  • The accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would be open when we click the post title.
  • Accordion representation means that posts are folded and it would be open when we click the post title.
    　If you didn't use "the/a" before, don't use it here now!
    "it" is redundant because the subject (posts) is still applicable in that clause. You can use "it" there but it sounds strange the same way "The dog barks and the dog runs" sounds stranger than "The dog barks and runs."
  • This movement was rather cool, but I couldn't read my post unless I click it.
  • This movement was rather cool, but I couldn't read my post unless I clicked them.
    　Posts = plural, so use them (plural).
  • I wanted to search corrected posts using some keywords, and to do this, there's a need all post are opened.
  • I wanted to search corrected posts using some keywords, and to do this, all the posts need to be open(ed).
  • So I created new one which is simple, light and open.
  • So I created a new one that is simple, light and open.
    　"That" and "which" have a very subtle difference in usage -- not even native English speakers can fully grasp the difference all the time. Really broadly (and this is not always the case): if you are referring to a specific instance, you are better off using "that." Consider the following examples of correct usage:

    A. My website uses the "X" design principle, which is simple, light, and open.
    B. My website uses a design principle that is simple, light, and open.

    This is a really small point, but if you can grasp it, you'll be better than a majority of native speakers!
  • Now I can search my posts effectively.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Hehehe I'm so tired to create this.
  • Hehehe I'm got so tired to creating this.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.
    　The above commenters don't know what "css" is and you should ignore their corrections.
This is actually super, super useful! What language did you write this in? Do you have the source uploaded somewhere?

One feature that I've thought would be really useful for lang-8 is the ability to "hide" crossed-out corrections so that only the correct sentence is left over. If this is in a language I know, maybe I can help you implement it. I don't know any scripting languages, though, so if it's not, like, Python or Java...
kanotown
Thank you so much for your helpful correction!
I had learned only like " 'which' and 'that' as relative pronouns are almost same," but today I learned the difference between them from you! :D

> What language did you write this in? Do you have the source uploaded somewhere?
Actually I used Java, html/css, and PHP.
Firstly, I extracted target sentences and comments using Java program I wrote. Secondly, I outputted decorated html data using also Java. Thirdly, I aggregated and showed each html data using PHP.

> One feature that I've thought would be really useful for lang-8 is the ability to "hide" crossed-out corrections so that only the correct sentence is left over.
Oh, it seems really useful and suitable for reviewing past posts. I'd like to implement it. :)

> If this is in a language I know, maybe I can help you implement it. I don't know any scripting languages, though, so if it's not, like, Python or Java...
I'm sorry for my poor English, I couldn't understand this sentence well. Is this means you know other compiler languages like C or Java? In fact, Java is a compiler language while JavaScript is a scripting language.
No. 4　thethinker83's correction
  • In the near future, I will re-create the css file and re-design this page.
  • In the near future, I will re-create the CSS file and re-design this page.
    　It's not all that important that CSS be capitalized, but it's good to be consistent with capitalizing acronyms. In any case, people who know about web design will understand what you mean.
I'm looking forward to seeing your future work on this.
kanotown
Thank you so much for your correction!
Indeed, "CSS" is easier to understand.

> I'm looking forward to seeing your future work on this.
Hehe, I hope you'll enjoy. :D
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